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The sea my poetry
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 12:40:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The Gulf of Mexico, circa 2005.
I walk along the edge of the water, watching the tides sway in and out,
a confused hand sweeping the dust of my love.
I think of you; the gulls spring and settle dusk beneath their wings,
the stars fold and sting their bright escape over the oceans face.
The sea is my poetry, the sky my lost embrace. I write the ebb and swell, your bosom breathes, I increase, write the rush and flow, your fingers press.
The sea is my poetry, you are the depths of the deepest sea, the deepest star that sets its breath over a stormy sea.
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iodinelove
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2005-06-24 00:40:37]
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Re: The sea my poetry
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:09:23 AM AEST
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Wow that's some deep, deep and wide, wide,
luv.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Awesome writing.
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Re: The sea my poetry
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:09:14 AM AEST
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Conjured up some great images and deep thought, beautiful writing.
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Re: The sea my poetry
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:05:01 AM AEST
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A great subject you've chosen. The sea insires me to no limits. The sea is my greatest inspiration.
An awesome piece, my friend.
Take care,
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