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Midnight Dance
Contributed by
Red_Spyder_Pixie
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 12:22:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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slit my wrists,
close my eyes.
sing very softly,
to your lullaby's.
screams of silent,
crys out loud.
blood coming out,
my head is bowed.
waiting for,
my painful moan.
i love the sound,
i'm all alone.
makes me tremble,
makes me weep.
i'm ready for,
my endless sleep.
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2005-06-24 00:22:15]
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Re: Midnight Dance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shorty_88 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 12:31:30 AM AEST
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Very moving. You portrayed a very realistic picture. I have also wrote a few peoms on suicide so if you want to check it out i go by the name Shorty_88.
Keep up the fantastic work and i look foward to reading more of your poetry |
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Re: Midnight Dance
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by Davinah on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 02:56:40 AM AEST
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| Short but sweet... Loved it... |
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