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Cheers!
Contributed by
upomik
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:33:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A cut on the wrist
A slap on the face
Constant reminder
That I'm a disgrace
I thought I could win
But I lost again
My effort to evict was weak
And now the hurt is locked in
I fail to see any happiness
Dark clouds paint my sky
Everything's dry and deserted
To useless to ask why
I feel like screaming and crying
Both at the same time
Though no closure will come from this
At least it'll buy some time
So cheers to three cuts tonight!
Yes! But I was going for four
This is my world I accept it now
Who could ask for more?
Copyright ©
upomik
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2005-06-23 22:33:58]
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Re: Cheers!
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 11:05:02 AM AEST
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Hmm... depressing. Lol...j/k... so are mine. Anyways, this is a really good poem. I love this part...
Everything's dry and deserted
To useless to ask why
It is very deep, and I know what you mean. Sadly, you probably do feel like this. I hope you can be happier. Great write...
Jodi |
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Re: Cheers!
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by Strawberry on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 02:00:38 PM AEST
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| This is very deep. The whole poem is. It's sad that its happening. Everything will turn around someday though. Sammi Jo |
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