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Waiting
Contributed by
kaya-chan
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:05:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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laying on the floor
my eyes staring at the ceiling
waiting for this nightmare to end
waiting for myself to wake from this sleep
at times it feels as though it drags on for eternity
though it's only been a minute
waiting for this nightmare to end
waiting for myself to wake from this sleep
is there a place on the other side of this mirror
I've been here for so long I cannot tell reality from my dreams
as I lay here watching the shadows dancing across my ceiling
waiting for this nightmare to end
waiting for myself to wake from this sleep
sleep eternal...........
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kaya-chan
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2005-06-23 22:05:52]
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Re: Waiting
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by jilted on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:27:05 PM AEST
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| Good poem, you just described exactly what i feel each day |
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Re: Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:32:28 PM AEST
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| Well written i feal like that day in and day out |
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Re: Waiting
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:26:56 AM AEST
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Who cares if it is depressing? Anyways... sleep eternal. That's good. I sleep through life, or though it seems... sleepwalking through busy times and not knowing what is real and what's a dream. You explained how it is in here... good job...
Jodi |
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