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too young
Contributed by
chantel
on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To young to die
To heavy to fly
To late to say goodbye
now I here the words why?
I will leave you behind
i will go through life with a tear i my eye
i will get out of here and not look back
no not, look back
i will never look back
to see this day
life is full of paths to take
you look down and find a way
you begin to walk and then fad away
you're too young to die
to heavy to fly
and it's to late to say goodbye
i will find you one day
look you in the eye and say
your too young to die
too young to die
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chantel
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2003-01-07 04:20:00]
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Re: too young
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:19:09 PM AEST
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| although this was a very sad write,I liked this one! Good peice!Christina |
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Re: too young
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by chantel on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:37:17 PM AEST
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thank you i accept your opinion you have some good points have a nice day
chantel |
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Re: too young
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by okokjazz on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:58:56 PM AEST
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| i like the sense of rhythm in this; it conveys the emotion most effectively |
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Re: too young
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:44:50 PM AEST
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A sad but enjoyable read....
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Re: too young
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:51:22 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sad and so beautifully written, i think way to many of us tend to run from life at one point or another and sometimes we don't even realize that's what were doing. I think this poem is full of reality and so full of emotion .....thank you Chantel for sharing this one it's a beautiful write...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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