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Soaring
Contributed by
Kayden
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:10:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Soaring through the clouds
She escapes the ground
My yells toward her so loud
But she is still not found
As I lay
And my thoughts sway
Just like her mind
In and out of time
Flying through the day
Stay away from the ground
Do not lay sound
Or my mind will fray
(((She’s fadeing away
Keeping from the sway
You cannot find her
She is in her own world
Her mind being slayed
By the worlds every thought
I can fly away
She says as she lays)))
Keep it down
She no more soars
Take my heart and take my will
I don’t need them any more
Copyright ©
Kayden
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2005-06-23 21:10:53]
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Re: Soaring
(User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:06:09 PM AEST
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Re: Soaring
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by Addelyn on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:39:28 PM AEST
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| Ohhhhh! this is good. such a wonderful write. Keep it up. |
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