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Reapers Call
Contributed by
jilted
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sometimes I feel like crying, but no tears run
Sometimes I feel like dying, but no killer comes
My twisted pain so entangled, it can not be undone
An empty shell, a body with no soul, all I feel is numb
For so long now it's been 1 step forward and 2 steps back
When will this cruel world cut me some slack
From the moment I entered, so many way's I'v been abused
I try and try again but it just keeps getting worse and I am so confused
Its so hard to make it through each day in a world that doesnt care
In a world that will not answer a very simple prayer
I know there's others out there, I know im not the only one
I try not to slip into self pity, but I cannot always be strong
This has been happening for so long, there's only so much one can take
Now I find myself fantasizing about the day i do not wake
I told myself that the next I was hurt would be the last, now the time has come
I see only one way to protect myself, I hope I have the courage to get it done
And now as sit on the bathroom floor
Stemming from my wrist, a puddle starts to form
I smile as I feel the tears start falling
And reach out when I finally hear the Reaper calling
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jilted
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2005-06-23 20:40:02]
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Re: Reapers Call
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:10:44 PM AEST
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woah...this is a powerful write this one.
Very emotive and full of angst.
I can very much relate to your dark wishful thinking. This world is a hard one to live in.
But great, heart wrenching write.
Hope to you dear poet. |
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Re: Reapers Call
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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I'm working on a poem with the same title.
I really liked the darkness of this write.
You potray the angst and helplessness well.
Well done. |
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Re: Reapers Call
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by RavenEnsued on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 03:07:00 PM AEST
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| Great Poem. Suxs that it's happened to so many people. I hope that you continue to write this great. |
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