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Time Takes Virtue
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:05:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tick Tock Tick Tock Tick Tock Tick Tock
The eyes of time open wide,
as she breathes sweet thick air.
Alone and distraught
his name carved into her arm
but she can't remember doing it.
The initials that threatened her so long ago
And though she is bleeding,
she mistakes the cold, tired fluid for tears.
Tears which stopped coming when things got numb.
Tears that were neglected by the sight of a glinting syringe.
Time moves on
and with that movement, drains all her virtue
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Inevitable
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2005-06-23 18:05:56]
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Re: Time Takes Virtue
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by umber on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 03:54:28 PM AEST
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| beautiful... this poem made me remember things i didnt want to remember and feel things i had forgotten i had ever felt. |
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Re: Time Takes Virtue
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by candysears on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 07:14:49 PM AEST
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Very touching and heartfelt...
God Bless! |
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