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Do you love me?
Contributed by
forsaken_soul33
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:37:06 PM in AEST
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I feel you hate me,
I think I am a mistake.
How your life, I seemed to complicate.
I'm sorry for waking up today,
Last night, my life I tried to take.
I see how you look at the others,
At all of my sisters and brothers.
How I wish you could love me, my mother.
You say I'm stupid,
But it's only because you're mad,
Just one good quality, I wish I had.
I go back to my corner,
And cry in my corner,
Hoping that tomorrow it will all be over.
I hope that one day you love so,
Before it's too late, and i decide to go.
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2005-06-23 17:37:06]
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Re: Do you love me?
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by Karlee14 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:58:53 PM AEST
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Oh this was so awesome. I know exacly how you feel. Those feelings will come and go. But take it from someone who knows, don't commit suicide. Because I'm glad I'm still here!! And someday you'll feel the same way,
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Re: Do you love me?
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:07:36 PM AEST
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| This was short and sweet and had good emotion |
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Re: Do you love me?
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by dahot1 on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 10:41:27 AM AEST
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| i enjoyed reading this poem it reminded me of waht im going threw its really good. |
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