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Untitled
Contributed by
Chubs
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:18:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Running through my aching head
Visions of you as you lie dead
When this act had first occurred
I could not see, my sight was blurred
Blood running down your reddened cheeks
As I stare my knees grow weak
Why did this happen to you of all people
I was hoping to see you under a steeple
I did my best to try and protect you
But it seems I will die too
With the knife resting firmly in my chest
The man who did this comes to finish the rest
I get up to continue the fight
But I see a gun, and a flash of light.
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Chubs
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2005-06-23 17:18:24]
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Re: Untitled
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by Blu on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:51:37 PM AEST
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That gave me chills... wasn't expecting the last line.
Haha. Nice imagery.
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Re: Untitled
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by brokengirl on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 07:53:54 PM AEST
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i like it. got a vivid picture in my head.
good poem |
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