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Coldhearted
Contributed by
dorkfish
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:20:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Trying to be the idea of perfection
Not knowing the extreme callousness portrayed
Yearning for attention when not caring to give any
Selfish acts of kindness presumed appreciated
Not giving unless benefiting in a way
Only thinking of oneself's heartache
Nothing good enough
Others must oblige
Finding comfort in basking oneself in greed
Gaining from inflicting on others
Never appreciating the goodness one consumes
Not understanding how one makes others feel snubbed
Feeding off the choices of others
Not offering a hand unless it is returned
Never taking risks
Running on fuel of emotions
Pretending to be what one is not
Never seeing the good
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Re: Coldhearted
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:27:45 PM AEST
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This is good, and it makes perfect sense to me...You really got your point across, and I hope the person learns from this and changes their ways...It's crummy when people are so wrapped up in themselves. I like the last 5 lines especially.
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Re: Coldhearted
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:58:39 PM AEST
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| there is a lot od hate and anger in this write and sense thats what you were going for then it was well done. keep up the writes and take care my friend....Steve |
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Re: Coldhearted
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by Dreama on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:17:59 PM AEST
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yeah, this makes perfect sense!! mate, its so close 2 home for many! there were a few lines where i was feeling guilty!!!! great how poetry lets it off ur chest eh!
keep up the great writing,
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Re: Coldhearted
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:29:25 PM AEST
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my goodness mrs fish.
wonder what B did to make you write such
an angry poem. never seen most of this behavior myself. good write you should get things like this out. wish you would show more of this to me.
peach |
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