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Guilty Pleasures
Contributed by
ruby_star_angel
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:24:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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drawing unknown pictures
admiring the sadistic art
blood seeping from these lines
stealing life from my heart
laughter escapes my lips
air growing thin
mind beginning to darken
I'm dying within
losing grip
blade is falling
landing isn't heard
only death's calling
fading into sleep
neverending dream
no mind left to comprehend
no voice left to scream
alone ... drifting wordlessly
there's nothing I could say
all my guilty pleasures
took my life away
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ruby_star_angel
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2005-06-23 11:24:12]
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Bones on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:43:48 AM AEST
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First of all, very good poem. I'm suprised no one has posted a comment up to this point. This poem is very emotional. Very nice. Good describtions. Overall I'd give it a 5 out of 5.
Don't let worldly things take you down. May your talents sing in the wind with the cheery birds of spring time.
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by brew on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:02:31 PM AEST
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No to sound too much on the depressed side after reading this.But life is out there....you have talent. Use it. Dont be as picky or un real.....too short and time is there.just member nothing is a guarnetee......go for all wheile you have it. Again great write.
Brew!~ |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:49:10 PM AEST
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Amazing, i really like the way you wrote this... but with that said if u really do what the poem implies then i suggest you get help it does make a difference.... but still good poem.
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:23:21 AM AEST
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wow
beautifully written,
"fading into sleep
neverending dream
no mind left to comprehend
no voice left to scream"
that stood out to me.
Amazing write. |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 07:03:57 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 07:04:22 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures
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by UnmovedMover on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 07:25:33 AM AEST
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| Good write |
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