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The Bigger Picture
Contributed by
Shorty_88
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:11:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The Bigger Picture
When you OD yourself on drugs
Your stomach aches and cramps
When you take a razor and cut your wrist
The blood makes your clothes damp
When you build up the courage to jump off a bridge
Just before you hit you want wings
When you fill a syringe up with sh*t just to kill you
The needle hurts and stings
When you stand on a stool with a rope round your neck
Eyes water while choking to death
When you walk into water and hold yourself under
You gasp until run out of breath
When you load a gun to pull a trigger
You find it hard to aim
When you park your car in front of a train
The waiting drives you insane
When you think about the world today
Too many kids take their lives
A scarier thought is that many succeed
Causing suicide levels to rise
If you ever think about taking your life
Throw the idea in the bin
Look at all the sh*t you will put your self through
In the end, it's easier to live
Copyright ©
Shorty_88
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2005-06-23 11:11:57]
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Re: The Bigger Picture
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:20:37 AM AEST
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| It was a good write Shorty and fallowed your other one well. I think we all have thought about suicide at one point or time in our life. I know I have but I have to much pride to loss my life to self death. Take care and keep up these writes life is truly a joy if only you let yourself live but the pain it brings is overwhelming….Steve |
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Re: The Bigger Picture
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:32:42 PM AEST
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duuuuuuude its liek u wrote this poem for me.
my b-day is on the 14th and on that day it was awful and ya i admit i was like an inch away from killing myself. but then i slowly decided life is better then the unknown
nice write
~Kortnie~ |
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