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Suffer
Contributed by
sride686
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:20:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I love you so much
But pain is all I bring
But I live to love you
So what does this mean
For to live is to suffer
To survive is to find meaning in the suffering
But all I do is bring tears to your eyes
So I’d rather be alone
Then to make you cry
The worst part of you is me
So all that’s left is for me to leave
Thoughts and questions
What should I do
Pain in my heart as I think of you
Tears that fall
Now blurred I see
As my thoughts unclear
Begin to bleed
So now I lay my head
As I start to cry
I close my eyes
As I start to die
Life is pain
And death is sweet
So in death I’ll find peace
And release my grief
~Steve~
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Re: Suffer
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:48:29 AM AEST
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Steve; this is an excellent write my friend...So full of pain and emotion. You did a great job with this. I especially like the 5th stanza...wow. Also, this line; "The worst part of you is me..." I have felt that way so many times before....Well, well done.
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Re: Suffer
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:38:08 PM AEST
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wow so much pain and emotion .
Awsome write friend.I alson really like this part.
The worst part of you is me
So all that’s left is for me to leave
take care |
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Re: Suffer
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:15:20 PM AEST
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| this is a good one. as i read over some of your poetry the more and more i fall in love with it. my favorite line in this one was " for to liveis to suffer to survive is to find the meaning of this suffering" it said something deep to me. i love it . it rocks! |
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