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Love buries me...
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 07:06:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i sit here in this chair
staring dark into the sky
i wonder unto where
she'll wander through my eye
i sit here in the mud
soak in puddles of the past
i'll cry tears of dirty blood
before i ever ask
will you sit with me awhile
to find shapes up in the sky?
will you bless me with a smile
and bring light in this eye?
if you can't, i'll wait
'til the winter buries me
comfortable in my fate
that love can't carry me...
dw
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Re: Love buries me...
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by she_smiles on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:01:05 AM AEST
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| wow, very emotional and sad. I liked this one. It had a nice flow and the feeling was expressed in something short and simple, and, but of course, beautiful. Nice job. :) |
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Re: Love buries me...
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:24:56 AM AEST
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| Yet another good write with the loss of love expressed so well. Keep up the writes I always enjoy reading your work man. Take care DW, your friend….Steve |
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Re: Love buries me...
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:40:08 PM AEST
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A sad lonely write on lost love, with an apparent theme of quiet perseverance, and perhaps pride.
Well done
Will |
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Re: Love buries me...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:41:29 PM AEST
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| very emotional and it had a nice flow. |
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Re: Love buries me...
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 06:41:04 PM AEST
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amazing..
great flow here..
devastating imagery..
"i sit here in the mud
soak in puddles of the past
i'll cry tears of dirty blood
before i ever ask"
excellent..
5 star write
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