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together
Contributed by
budge
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:28:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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So many shades to the earth so many colours
people alone away from the others
bravery is the fear not to cry
a window to the soul is an eye
so open your eyes and let the tears fall
for everyone has there pains so let go of them all
have nothing left not even your fears
then trees grow from your tears
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budge
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2005-06-23 06:28:30]
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Re: together
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:53:32 AM AEST
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Honestly??...
I think its beautiful...especially the last line.
I love trees lol
Short,sweet and to the point.I think its well rounded..meaning it is neatly delivered
Well Done!
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Re: together
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by she_smiles on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:07:56 AM AEST
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Incredible! This poem really does something for me, more than any other I've read I think. It was short, and simple, yet so meaningful. You totally have the right idea about letting oneself cry, for the sake of the soul. Makes me think that those who can't express or get rid of their pain by crying are what create gaps among the human race - but that's a broader idea. Haha! Sorry for that little tangent.
Anyways, you did an awe-some job. Take care :)
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Re: together
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by brew on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:53:40 PM AEST
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I thought it was from your soul.........thats what keeps all together. You must be inner connected with it, as well as another to have what is wanted and needed.
Good write.
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Re: together
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:17:15 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this but it was the last line that really clinched it, great ending...
then trees grow from your tears.
Got me thinking about the natural world and how we are all part of nature, tears falling to the earth and sprouting forth new life(bet you're thinking bloody hell who let the pagan in here! lol)
Johnny.
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