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The daylights rabid song
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:49:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To twice the daylights rabid song,
to pass dread winters soft embrace,
and follow such loves that long
Endure, suffer much, bravely face
their own affliction, only to depart
with satin smiles to encase,
Against their own demand, an empty heart,
that, in throes of life forlorn,
grants no ease to what names impart,
Grants no pleasure to new love born,
grants no thing to bear its seed
without sweat and blood to take its thorn.
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iodinelove
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2005-06-23 03:49:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The daylights rabid song
(User Rating: 1 ) by blackholesun on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:58:19 AM AEST (User
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very deep and in chaos it rings a bit of life and beauty in my ear ,ony to hear it from your sweet lips i bet it sounds like an angels caress |
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Re: The daylights rabid song
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:13:25 AM AEST (User
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That was gorgeous. Very old stylish, and it was awesome to read. Such gorgeous imagery. Nice work.
~Kara |
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Re: The daylights rabid song
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChrisSawyer on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:40:01 PM AEST (User
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I like the scheme of the poem. It's not bad. |
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