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With Great Fervor
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:49:27 AM in AEST
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Dreaming of your face
Filling my heart
My inner space
Haunted and wanting to haunt
You when we are apart
To be with you is all I could ever want
You imbue my world and free my soul
With out your love and that of the majesty
With out you I would never be whole
We are lovers yet again
Kissing in romance like a tragedy
Only in this play nothing is pretend
I wish in could stay inside
In you for always
Not just in your heart or by your side
Nothing can overwhelm me like you do
Nothing could ever lead me astray
Yours is the only love I need to be true
Thieves can never steel your glow
Your resonating light
It shines inside me too and I won’t ever let it go
With great fervor our hearts heal this cold universe
Like stars in the night time sky we shine bright
With you inside me all my darkness is dispersed
I am most vulnerable when it comes to you
You read between the lines and make it an art
You have seen the best and worst of me and you still do
Love me the way you do
With your soul mind body and heart
I will always love you through and through
That is why I am always dreaming of your face
Of the way your eyes make my world more sapphire
In my heart and soul and mind you will always a place
You are the undersetting for all I want to be
With you in my life I could always reach higher and higher
I could shape the stars and make new constellations just for you to see
This is how I will always feel about you
Always more and never less
Always dreaming of you
Not just at night when I am alone
Not just when I rest
Not just to feel at home
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Re: With Great Fervor
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:03:03 AM AEST
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Great write, my friend.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: With Great Fervor
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:12:20 AM AEST
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| i really like the style of this, and the unique way you used rhyme, and the words bring nic warm fuzzies, beautiful, muaw. |
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Re: With Great Fervor
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 04:09:12 AM AEST
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With great fervor our hearts heal this cold universe
Like stars in the night time sky we shine bright
Lovely, lilting lines. You say you don't like it? I think it's perfect the way it is. There's much emotion and honesty here, good choice of words too. Kudos. :) |
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Re: With Great Fervor
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by Kie on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:34:13 AM AEST
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Oh such longing and the appropriate word "Fervor". If we didn't have a heart gosh we'd never write!
I find all your writes beautiful, always.
Kie |
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Re: With Great Fervor
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:29:48 PM AEST
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Not just at night whenI'm alone
Here in my bed, your loving home
Not just when I rest and sleep
My love forever, yours to keep.
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing, Ros |
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Re: With Great Fervor
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by Zeldianus on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:30:10 PM AEST
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| amazingly beautiful!! |
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