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who am i
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:48:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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who am i?i dont even know,who i am does it even show?
i died inside because you lied,and now im as cold as stone,
so just go away and leave who ever i am allone.
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Re: who am i
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:21:26 AM AEST
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| i can relate this one good job |
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Re: who am i
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:56:00 PM AEST
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| The word is spelled alone...A-L-O-N-E. I notice you misspell that one alot. I love this line"I died inside because you lied, and now I'm cold as stone." Wow, what goes around comes around huh. Karma baby. |
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