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Taunting Blade
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:59:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It calls to me
It taunts me
Tells me it could help me.
It could help me bring fourth the pain I hide
deep inside.
I sit down and cry
Thinking I should not be here.
Hoping I would die.
Wishing that today
would be the last day
I have to sit and indour the pain
I hide so deep inside.
"Emily," it calls
so softly and indouring.
"I could help you with your pain.
Make it all go away.
just one more time
it could be your last,
use me now.
Forget your past."
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Re: Taunting Blade
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by cerulean on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:07:10 AM AEST
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| nice write. i used to cut a lot and your poem totally describes the feelings that go along with it. i ended up getting caught and for a while it felt impossible to stop, but once you get past a certain point, it gets so much better. so, if you can make it to that point, its worth it. good luck, julie |
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Re: Taunting Blade
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by FireArchDruid on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:09:01 AM AEST
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| Yeah I also have cut and burned myself in the past. Good write. |
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Re: Taunting Blade
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 06:20:32 PM AEST
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such a painful write but very well written..
"I could help you with your pain.
Make it all go away.
just one more time
it could be your last,
use me now.
Forget your past."
much love to you..
my heart goes out to you friend..
B |
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Re: Taunting Blade
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:14:26 AM AEST
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wonderful write. its a great poem. and i can totally relate to it. cant wait to read more of your poems. and i hope things will get a atleast alil bit better for you. i understand how you feel. i have cut too.
ever need to talk, ill be here.
peace n love.
jenny |
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Re: Taunting Blade
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by Xsitm on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:31:29 AM AEST
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| dark and very good |
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