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In the darkness I hide
Contributed by
firearchdruid
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:45:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the darkness black as night I hide
In this hole of silence I can push my pain aside
Does it still hurt if no one can see the pain im in ?
Love is a game that no one can win
Standing in the shadows watching the couples stride by
In my mind I cant seem to understand why
Im all alone here in this dark place
Forever hidden so no one can see my face
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2005-06-22 23:45:57]
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Re: In the darkness I hide
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by Shattered_soul on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:03:12 AM AEST
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very well explained, i feel how you feel though mine is a different game, i am scared of love and what it brings. your a great poet and i like the way you word your feelings
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Re: In the darkness I hide
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by Maciej on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:34:42 PM AEST
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| Doesn't everyone feel unloved at one time or another making thispoem, of universal appeal |
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