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Summer Sea
Contributed by
man_On_High
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:44:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Climbing up the hillside
beneath the summer stars
I listen to the whisper
of the drowsy summer sea..
The newly risen moon
so majestic as she glows
on the undulating waters
where the ships are sailing free.
The moon and stars illuminate
this sleepy summer sea..
while drawing on it's tide
from the city up the bay,
for I know how it will look
and how boundless it will be
when we and all our children
have forever passed away.
It's form shall never change
as the happiness I Bore...by walking 'neath the stars-
slowly strolling by it's shore...
I cannot say of all your glory
but I hope you all can see
all the reason for my story..
How I love the summer sea!
B
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Re: Summer Sea
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:23:36 AM AEST
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Bill from one new englander 2 another, man
if this doesn't hit home i don't know what
does, i felt my feet in the sand and the salt
on my tounge, beautiful vision you brought
me.
Ben |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:35:26 AM AEST
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Is this Cape Cod again?? Geez I'm going, that's it!! I love the nostalgia of this write, and it flows calmly much like the sea you speak of with such passion...It sounds so peacefully bountiful...wow! The third stanza made me smile.
Scorp. |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by wizard on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:34:17 AM AEST
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i heard the waves crashing as i read this..great write.
wiz |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:13:46 AM AEST
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The words are so visual. It is like a painting Alice in Wonderland could get lost in, and be in total heaven.
Rita |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by waos on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:16:00 AM AEST
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I personally have never seen the sea, as I'm in the prairies in Canada.
But this was gorgeous, it led me into your experience of it and
put beautiful images in my mind. Nice job.
~Kara |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:46:45 AM AEST
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| I like this poem. |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:24:26 PM AEST
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| Hello,I've just been sitting by the sea and I know just what you mean,the sea is constant yet ever changing.Lovely poem |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:39:09 PM AEST
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this was just fantastic, thanks for brinign me to this wonderful world of this summer sea
brilliant,
do you give writing lessons?
where do i sign up? |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by nanb294eva on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:03:45 PM AEST
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that was beutiful it brought me back to the night at beach and right into the morning how breath taking it was to watch the sun come up and hear the waves with you by my side made it all the better
that was one of the greats
love nancy |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:21:53 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful. So pleased I had the chance to read such a wonderful write
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:26:18 PM AEST
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OMG!!! This is fantastic!! What a beautiful picture you have painted here... Great imagery!!
You are a very talented poet..I am glad I read you.. dunno how I've missed you all these months... (Damn my work!!) j/k
Jenni |
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Re: Summer Sea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 11:39:10 PM AEST
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*****Climbing up the hillside
beneath the summer stars
I listen to the whisper
of the drowsy summer sea..
So peaceful and tranquil the beginning of this poem.
****The newly risen moon
so majestic as she glows
on the undulating waters
where the ships are sailing free.
Peaceful, a beautiful sight, such freedom.
*****for I know how it will look
and how boundless it will be
when we and all our children
have forever passed away.
A peaceful thought just knowing the beauty will remain as you go on to higher places. What a beautiful poem this is. Serenity at its best, untroubled soul.
Wonderful write
Be well,
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: Summer Sea
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 01:12:29 AM AEST
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Stunning, Bill, [and so impossibly full of imagery]
*sigh*
so wonderfully serene, my dearest friend. I am completely in love with
this piece. It is filled with the warmth of a soft caress and the emotion of
a gentle kiss.
As always, a complete work of perfection.
Well done here, Billy. Soooooooo beautiful!
~Breezy |
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