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Befor You Start To Write
Contributed by
ABySs
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:31:41 PM in AEST
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Iv had it up to here with this half ***
Barely thought out peaces of crap
Next time you deside to write
Please keep These things in mind
Dig deep in that soul and just let it roll
For I'm tired of reading about how
Billy boy is running off with Bobby-sue
Thats been done a million times through
And if i have to read one more line about
How you just cant live without some girl
I swear im goin to shout so grow up or go pout
And I sure dont want hear about how
You want still your wrist because you
Just cant seem to deal with life thought *****
So heres my advice go ahead bleed out
Just remember one thing while that
Beautiful crimson flows on out
The way you'v been day dreaming about
There is NO comein back No second chance
Come on someone write me a line about
Love that transcend space and time
Or the pain that you cant even begin
To compare to that damn black rain
Tell me of a heaven that yearns for hell
Write me a line that makes me want to cry
Or take a ride among the starts an drink the milkyway
Come on what you waiting for?
This is in no way meant to offend anyone yet some how im sure i have
Copyright ©
ABySs
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2005-06-22 22:31:41]
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Re: Befor You Start To Write
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by LevyMetal on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:46:00 PM AEST
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| original..pretty good |
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Re: Befor You Start To Write
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:16:57 PM AEST
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| *starts a slow clap* |
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Re: Befor You Start To Write
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:22:43 AM AEST
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Well I must give you due,
I'm sure you've offended,
One or two,
if you don't like depressing lines,
and wanna have a laugh,
why not read mine?
lol! all the best from johnny
( who is as modest as ever!) |
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