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Time
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A new stranger approaches
As you walk by me
I begin to think
I begin to wish
That time could stand still
Just for a moment…
I will not forget you
Nor will I let you go
You are a part of me
You are the reason
It is in your eyes
That a season
Brings rain
And the time crawls…
Time is a factor for which I did not account
It plays this crucial yet often incognito role
Where it is hardly seen and rarely ever felt
Though its potency when reflected upon in silence
Is evident in everything that makes me tick
And on to tomorrow where the routine needs a shift
Needs an uplift, needs a face to smile, and a kiss to lip
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Re: Time
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:47:47 PM AEST
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| this was sweet, short, thoughtful. i enjoyed it. especially the last stanza, which had alot of depth to it . great job. |
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Re: Time
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:19:09 AM AEST
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It's amazing that you can pen such pretty poems without anyone for inspiration...This has a soft, delicate feel to it...almost reflective. Nice job.....I like this.
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