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Voices, Many Voices
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 08:47:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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They tease me and thrill, they always seem to taunt
Recklessly terrifying, like a ghost that longs to haunt
Speaking tales of pure horror, of such vile things
Capable of alluring me while a song of melody it sings
Pleading with me to sin and causing me to embrace wrong
Trying to fight them but I am outnumbered, as if amongst the throng
They speak to me everyday, of another life than this
One of peace and comfort, talking of death’s kiss
God they are overtaking me, refusing to let me go
Imprisoning me in my own mind, twisting everything I know
Creatures of the unknown, could this be a curse of insanity?
Leave me in peace now; spare me from this profanity
From these many voices that are plaguing my mind
Dark thoughts running rampant in this space that’s so confined.
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-06-22 20:47:48]
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:17:19 PM AEST
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| i thought this was great, your words really embrace the poem's darkness though i felt tere was going to be more...like you left it in the middle...i dont know..thats just what i get. you did a great job though |
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:20:31 PM AEST
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I thought this was really good. Your choice of words were definitely what made this poem dark.
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:19:33 PM AEST
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outnumbered you may be, but keep fighting.
great poem
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by foxfire44 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:23:11 PM AEST
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| keep fighting the voices and you did right when you spoke to God he will be right by your side good poem |
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:23:13 PM AEST
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a wicked tale of the mind set free in chaos..
I love it..
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:41:28 AM AEST
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Wow. Well done! Excellent timing with the flow and the rhymes. You really told quite a story, this was well-worded...Great job.
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by WAE on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 04:57:08 PM AEST
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Hey there,
A lovely one. I have a short story called Voices, voices... It's funny to find that we think in about the same way...
Good Luck!
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Re: Voices, Many Voices
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:03:21 PM AEST
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wow thats a touching poem
particularly to me
because i have a friend
that is in the hospital
cause she started hearing voices
great write
-->Rae |
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