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Shower
Contributed by
justme03
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A foggy and smoggy glass mirror
I write “hello” on it and water droplets
drip down from each downstroke of every letter
The water, scolding hot with steam to relax my mind
then it turns ice cold to wake me up
I feel rejuvenated and ready for anything
I walk out into the world
New and Clean
By the end of the day I feel as if I have been through a war.
I am Hot and Sticky
I am Worn out and feel Old
I’m not sure I can survive til tomorrow
I walk back into my oasis to become new again
I let the water drown me and take away the pain
I sing out loud, happy for the moment
All my fears and yesterdays tears wash away
I stand in front of the mirror
Foggy and Smoggy
I write “hello” on it and water droplets
drip down from each downstroke of every letter
I see my reflection behind the fog
and wave
I say hello to the day.
~Kortnie~
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Re: Shower
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by JustAGirl001 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 08:47:48 PM AEST
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| LMAO! I'msorry. It's a really good poem. It's new too. I bet not many people have written about taking a shower. |
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Re: Shower
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:38:48 AM AEST
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| This is a really great poem. So real & beautiful..... you are an amazing talent! |
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Re: Shower
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by Channing on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:46:12 PM AEST
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| Interesting, I like the whole shower theme to this poem. Very beautiful and vivid. |
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