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Addiction
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:54:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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She lay an addiction before herself
and began to drink all the pain away.
Not stopping until she was numb inside.
And yet, no matter how much she bled into her system,
the suffering from his wounds still lashed through.
Locked inside her own delicate prison
No one could breech the effects of drugs.
Just blood, alcohol and needles.
Slowly the life began to leave her
and she fell into invisible arms as sharp as glass
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Inevitable
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2005-06-22 16:54:11]
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Re: Addiction
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:44:00 PM AEST
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| i liked this. the ending really put a spin on the whole thing...gave it that extra pazaz...it was clever. its dakr and sad and a good write. keep on writing. |
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Re: Addiction
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by cerulean on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:14:08 PM AEST
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| awesome...loved the part about her own delicate prison, it's the perfect description |
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Re: Addiction
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by Solo on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:13:49 PM AEST
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| Masterful! |
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