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CAPTURED TEARS
Contributed by
joe-joe
on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Captured tears never shed, fill my dreams as I lay awake upon my bed,
Pain cutting so deep into the annuals of my heart,
I'm beginning to feel like the dispose Emperor Napoleon Bonepart,
Waiting for his exemption, finally realizing he has missed his only chance at redemption.
Unable to release in sorrow's flight, a reservoir back-up, drowning out the day's light,
Steep in internal misery, I cannot weep,
Flooded by emotional tears, tormented, my world in chaos with surmounting fears.
Uncried issues swelling in my soul,
Imprisoned, they cause my heart to agonize, as I loose my self-control,
Raging all the night, enraged, cancelling out every flicker of joy and delight.
Captured in a corked bottle, ready to explode like a reveled up throttle,
Aged as a very rare wine, held captive in a cold darken dugeons light,
Yet without flavor, no bouquet or sweet smelling savor,
For rage and anger have embellished my soul, becoming my true bedfellows,
As in my minds eye the wind whips and bellows,
Rampaging like an elephant terrorizing in the jungle,
As with fear we scream, that life is but an empty dream.
Copyright ©
joe-joe
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2003-01-06 23:20:00]
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Re: CAPTURED TEARS
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by sublime on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:20:59 AM AEST
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| I can definately relate to this. Excellent write. |
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Re: CAPTURED TEARS
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:43:53 AM AEST
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| Very good I really liked it. I really enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: CAPTURED TEARS
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:24:27 AM AEST
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My tears flow way to easy i realized this after reading this poem lol.....this is so beautifully written i enjoyed this one alot....thanks for sharing it my friend, i can still relate to the rage one get's inside even though my tears fall freely, it hit home with me as i can relate to it quite well.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: CAPTURED TEARS
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:29:31 PM AEST
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| this is amazing...i love this poem... |
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Re: CAPTURED TEARS
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST
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I cannot express how this poem made me feel. The emotions put into this poem is outstanding wow... um I dont know what to say except I enjoyed this. *blinks away tears*
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