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(untitled)
Contributed by
brokenfire77
on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:48:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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A life like any other I do live,
Although I live to love a life without anything to give.
My life is worth living free of care and doubt,
I have no need for useless words of remorse,
for I use the will to shout.
Free will to speak and yet I use it not,
For these free words our ancestors bravely fought.
And when I exercise my will to speak aloud,
People tend to lok my way and begin to gather a crowd.
When I speak my words of wisdom people tend to listen,
With tears in their eyes they truely realize in life what's missing!
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Re: (untitled)
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChrisSawyer on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:38:08 PM AEST (User
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I can't quite say that I feel the anger in your poem. It's okay, but I can say I've read better. |
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