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Dragon's Tears
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:48:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Here I sit alone, my love
These long and lonely years
Staring at the sky above
Crying out my tears
There you lie, a pile of bones
Nothing else of you
Dead outside your castle home
Wet amongst the dew
The wizard cast an awful spell
That brought me all these fears
You cannot be alive again
Without some dragon tears
What is that, just lying there?
I think it is the one
Please help me dragon, have a care
I know your time has come
Come cry with me my dragon
I really need your tears
And I will send you up to heaven
And take away your cares
Now I have my precious jewels
I give them to my love
Praying that new life it fuels
with guidance from above
Is this a miracle I see
As I look on the ground
My prince is looking back at me
New life for him is found
Your dragon tears have saved my love
We owe it all to you
May you be watching over us
Up in your sky so blue
And we will send our prayers today
To guide you, far and wide
Thank you once again we pray
My prince and I, his bride
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-06-22 16:48:11]
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Re: Dragon's Tears
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:46:17 PM AEST
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| it was creative and a different approach to romance. unique. and i really liked it. great job. |
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Re: Dragon's Tears
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:02:03 PM AEST
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wow, you really are talented, i love the way you write.
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Re: Dragon's Tears
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:19:06 PM AEST
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how unique and original..
"A Dragon's Tears"
Splendid work..
you amaze me with each new post..
can't wait to read what's next-
As Always..
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Re: Dragon's Tears
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by babykitty on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:31:47 PM AEST
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| this is really good. i like your style of writing. it's uniques. you have talent. keep it up. i look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Dragon's Tears
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:54:47 AM AEST
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2 perfect 4 perfection, so i'll simply call it a masterpeice, poetic emotions as though the
poem wrote itself, as you were living the fantasy, beautifuly done . . .
Ben |
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Re: Dragon's Tears
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by bernard on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:03:24 AM AEST
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| Gwenevere you certainly have a way with words this is exquisite. To say any more would just distract from my feelings as I read this Masterpiece. Keep em coming from bernard. |
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Re: Dragon's Tears
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by TenarIlithiya on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:00:58 PM AEST
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| It was nice, But I was confused at first. It took me about half the poem to acctually figure out what it was about. I was under the Impression that it was about the dragon himself. nice though. |
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