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Arthur, Baby King
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:32:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Out of the skies, the darkness forms
A flash of light , a thunderstorm
Raging sea's and howling winds
This is where legend begins
The waves rush up, a cave to claim
The gulls cry out old Merlin's name
Far inside the cavern deep
Merlin,wizard, fast asleep
In his dreams he see's a face
And Camelot, a wondrous place
He knows this face will be his king
The tempest, raging storm will bring
All is hushed, the sea is calm
A baby lies there free from harm
He reaches out his tiny hand
To Merlin, magician of the land
And as he stoops, the babe to see
He feels all fears and worries flee
You are the one,the eternal spring
Welcome sire, Arthur, King
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-06-22 16:32:26]
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Re: Arthur, Baby King
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:04:58 PM AEST
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again, i must say 'wow'. what great imagery and flow. escellent work
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Re: Arthur, Baby King
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:13:45 PM AEST
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I don't even know what to say-
this, Ros, is an original triumph in all it's glory:
"All is hushed, the sea is calm
A baby lies there free from harm
He reaches out his tiny hand
To Merlin, magician of the land"
I will read it again and again..
this is one of your best
As Always..
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Re: Arthur, Baby King
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST
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A female tolkien is what you are brilliant and
well crafted . . .
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