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Unhappy Bunny
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bunny sits by darkened candlelight
with hawian shirted goblins of fright,
love stinks but it makes good rhymes
all will come to you sweetly in time,
as he wanders in minds; an abyss
there little his insightful eye shall miss,
holding his head as the zombies swam
lights his cigar as it begins to rain,
slowley a smile upon his wicked lips
he grins as blood in wax it drips,
he picks up quill and puts to paper
softly in blows windfalls zephyr.
Bunny..
Anyway who wants the shine of sun?
..living in the darkness is just too much fun..
A Black Rose for you my friend...
dedicated to my friend M.Z.
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2003-01-06 23:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unhappy Bunny
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:53:00 PM AEST
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Wow, Vanessa this was aweome I liked it a lot you put so much feeling into this. I loved all of this. All this is so amazing nothing is missing. Way to go. Is this dedicated to MInionZombie???? he's my friend as well.
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Re: Unhappy Bunny
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:03:25 PM AEST
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| Yup yup:) |
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Re: Unhappy Bunny
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:58:27 PM AEST
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Hi Nessa,
I loved this poem! It was really good, it really brought a big smile to my face, it was the last thing I was expecting. It means a lot to me, and it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy to know there are people out there who care *big hug* - of course, I feel all this in a dark, zombified MZ way, lol.
A wonderful write, it cheered me up! I am very touched by it, thankies and kisses and some hugs too
MZ xxx |
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Re: Unhappy Bunny
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:43:18 PM AEST
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| great imagination,,well written,,,but the light is always around you,,just smile,,spooky |
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Re: Unhappy Bunny
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:17:04 PM AEST
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| very interesting good write |
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Re: Unhappy Bunny
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:28:33 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa. This is so dark. I'm grateful this isn't dedicated to me. Great write, my friend.
Always,
William |
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Re: Unhappy Bunny
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:41:44 AM AEST
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Nessa,
You are awesome, I keep going over your volume of work and ask PUBLISH PLEASE?
I read you and my envious soul desires the talent you have in your little finger.
This would fill my being.
Another great write.
Hugz
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