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Never Visit Neverland
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 03:39:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dragon tails
And fairy tales
Where the humpback whale
Met the convicted killer shark
Just paroled from jail
The wicked witch
Of the wild, wild, west
Threatens to undress
And reveal her wrinkled
Shrunken left breast
And cause this stomach
Its last and final
Sickness
Jack and his stalk
Left the dog home
Went for a walk
The beans he ate
Wild acid dose
Climbed the ladder
To the giant
Who manufactures
Pills, comatose
Peter pan
A boy in tights
Never visit Neverland
The monster there
Is dark but painted over white
A horror show
Stay at the beach child
And fly your lofty kite
Creatures of the night
Bugs in your bed bite
Dragon tails
And fairy tales
Am I ever truly awake
When does reality
Seek the dream to overtake
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jyssvw
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Re: Never Visit Neverland
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by ABySs on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 03:48:29 PM AEST
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i like the idea behind the write
not all of it flows just right but i like it |
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Re: Never Visit Neverland
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:59:23 PM AEST
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If I were to toss a proverbial rock into your mind..
I would never hear a splash-
as deep as you go..
man.. I love this write
I saw it all..
awesome!
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Re: Never Visit Neverland
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:58:52 AM AEST
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*refrains from telling joke that comes to mind re: M.O.H's comment* : )
Seriously now; this is most definitely a dark write dealing with a very disturbing subject...I think you pulled this off well, and found a fabulously unique way to do it, as only you could...Good stuff jyss...Good stuff..!!
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