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Sorry Love
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:20:32 PM in AEST
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when i pull you out of the crashing oblivion
again
you'll put your hands on my face
gently
and i'll pull away as though you've stabbed me
again
crushed the moment
destroyed
you ask me in the quiet
why
everytime you get close i shiver
freezing
i callously abliterate your affection
with knowledge i can describe
pictures
the cold hollow of my chest
silent
the tighten and collapse
screaming
inside you are a wildfire that i deny
peaceless
your touch burns through the sheild
emmotionless
you are the poison in my veins
deadly
you are the corruption of my hope
vile
you are everything that i allow
destruction
you are my victim
solitude
i cannot feel you, i cannot feel you
empty
i pull you out of the crashing waves of oblivion
again
simply because you are my weakness
reliance
i don't know how to love
sorry
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Re: Sorry Love
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by Blu on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 02:24:29 PM AEST
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Very very cold, but well written.
I can definitely relate to this.
It resonates very well, I can almost feel the winter of my heart when I read this.
Beautifully tragic.
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Re: Sorry Love
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:04:09 AM AEST
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AMAZING
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