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Not The Way
Contributed by
HUMGIRL18
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Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Floating like I'm nothing
Trapped within
It's deep and wide
Jumping with the feeling
The first time
All over again
The same time
Leave me here
I shouldn't try
This is not the way...
It stings from fear
And burns with shame
There's nothing left
For me to cut away
I hide the tears
The pain will hide itself
the screams no one hears
It's all inside
This is not the way...
Living with it down inside
Giving up the fight
Nothing to choose from
Everything's been lost
Copyright ©
HUMGIRL18
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2003-01-06 21:40:00]
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Re: Not The Way
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by EmSal on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 09:49:18 PM AEST
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| That isn't the way...good poem. |
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Re: Not The Way
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:38:21 PM AEST
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ooh...this is beautiful...one of the best poems i've read today...'there's nothing left for me to cut away' that's so me
well done, beautifully written |
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Re: Not The Way
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 05:21:26 PM AEST
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Very nice
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Re: Not The Way
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by lilch4ever on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:20:57 AM AEST
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| Really deep I like that. Nicely written. |
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