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nature
Contributed by
macaroni
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:06:42 AM in AEST
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nature such a beutiful thing,the leaves blowing,the wind flying,somtimes the sun bursting and blazing,in thw woods the smell of pine nature is wonderful.
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Re: nature
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by foxfire44 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:23:04 AM AEST
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| short and to the point....you hit it all not a bad job |
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Re: nature
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by europeanprincess on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 09:48:57 PM AEST
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| Poem is short and there are grammer and spelling errors, but that is not the main idea of your poem. I think it is a heart felt try to write about nature. Go a little more and write what you really feel about nature. How nature reflects your soul perhaps; or about how nature may resemble the one you love. Thank you for sharing. |
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