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Freedom From Pain
Contributed by
FireArchDruid
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I feel the freedom inching near
Soon I will never again have anything to fear
The knife digging into my skin nice and slow
I watch as the dark blood begins to flow
I lay back ready to die
Never again will I have to cry
I open my eyes to watch the Reaper come
Finally I have some freedom
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2005-06-21 23:36:42]
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Re: Freedom From Pain
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by tres_estrellas on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:25:05 AM AEST
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| Nice. I can agree with the feelings in this one. keep it up! |
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Re: Freedom From Pain
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:39:24 AM AEST
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| so sad so very sad. |
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Re: Freedom From Pain
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by cerulean on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:53:31 PM AEST
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| i love this. you described the feelings really well |
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