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She Was Broken
Contributed by
SilentScreamsofSuicide
on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:29:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She was broken
In spirit, body, and soul
Thousands of pieces
Scattered around
Weak and helpless
Craving what once was hers
But it would not be found
It was unavoidable
The end to her long downward spiral
And they act like they didn’t know
Like they couldn’t see her pain
Written across her arms in red
But then, in mere seconds,
Their perfect world came crashing down
When worlds collide, no good can result
Locked up, she’s long been dead
Desperate to live, disappointments arise
Silent tears streaming from her eyes
Her hopes shattered.
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2005-06-21 21:29:04]
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Re: She Was Broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:33:52 PM AEST
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| I really like that. Well written. I feal that way at times |
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Re: She Was Broken
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:53:58 AM AEST
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A very sad, but well expressed write...I like it.
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