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Not Opposed to Breathing
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:30:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Enslaved by the angels at the gates of Eden
Caught attempting to transcend the heavens
And make it safely back to very the beginning
Back to the birthplace of each of our souls
Back to the creation, back to, before we were all born
Lectured in the novelty of thinking a place such as this exists
I have added conjecture and pounded on its door with my fist
I still stand here, I await an answer, I can hear the footsteps
Come closer my angels, take my hand, do not fear my human flesh
Do not believe what they say about us, we humans are not dangerous
Sometimes morose and morbidly opposed to breathing and such
Though unlike yourselves, we have pumping hearts, that reverse, that logic
That brings us back to the original start
To the miracle, to the human gift, exquisitely sculptured, living art
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2005-06-21 18:30:18]
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Re: Not Opposed to Breathing
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:36:32 PM AEST
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| breathtaking. the title was what drew me in, but it dose not do the poem justice. your poems amazing,beautiful,makes the reader think. great write. |
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Re: Not Opposed to Breathing
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by JasTrask_22 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:36:44 PM AEST
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that was awesome. you can get alot of imagery in your mind from reading it. loved it!
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Re: Not Opposed to Breathing
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:50:15 PM AEST
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Wow jyss...paint away, paint away!! Wonderful imagery in this write....Great job, and I love the story you tell...."I still stand here, I await an answer..." Hmmmm.....(!!!!) Yeah!! I can relate....lol
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Re: Not Opposed to Breathing
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:43:58 PM AEST
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my thoughts are truant-
you leave me with much to ponder in this..
you brought me there and back
deep thoughts.. these
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