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Spring
Contributed by
JasTrask_22
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:01:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Everything's so green;
and so wonderful now.
It's just like a sea;
with just birds making a sound.
Watching droplets on the leaves,
they form patterns on the ground.
Wondering what it would be..
Everything's so brown;
like the bark on the tallest tree.
The sun is shining down;
on something called you and me.
Look at those flowers, wow.
Springtime is so pretty.
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2005-06-21 18:01:15]
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Re: Spring
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:16:32 PM AEST
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| it was such a nice and dreamy poem. i enjoyed it. spring times is beauti***** and you bring that out. good job. |
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Re: Spring
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by Mild_Tempest on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 07:30:05 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was so refreshing. I could imagine everything! |
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Re: Spring
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by mom11159 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 08:33:13 AM AEST
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I love spring as I love this poem so captivating are your words the imagery gave me such a beautiful picture excellent job a breath of fresh air ahhhhhhh loved it
Cathy |
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