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Contributed by fairytalecamper on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:51:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Can I be optimistic?
These lyrics you wrote,
All of them are factual.
He's lurkign in the shadows
Of all my summer photography
He's dancing behind the general manager
While the general manager tells us
"Do not play with fire";
Although it's understood
Being a pyromaniac is all part of the experience.
Those friendly hugs
That are a little too long
To be classified as platonic.
Watching the wild blue yonder,
Fade to darkness,
It's the glistening starts,
That remind us nothing is ever forgotten,
We're all still together,
If not in body then in mind.
So as we sit there frozen,
Focusing on the flickering flames in front of us
Everything falls together
All the scattered fragments of you and me.
This is me being optimistic
Believing all those words were true
It's my turn now,
For true love and nothign after.
I can bottle up the time
I'd spend placing x's over o's
And use the sharpie ink for something better
Like remembering togetherness.
Holding hands with you
As we walk down memory lane
Humming Disney musicals.
Ignoring the reality
Nothing lasts forever.

Copyright © fairytalecamper ... [ 2005-06-21 15:51:51]
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Re: GPS (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 09:33:43 PM AEST
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I totally liked the poem. This was a great word play. I hope to read more of your poems. Thank you for sharing this.

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