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She Bled
Contributed by
bushkeeper
on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:16:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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from solitary tower
behind the mask of lies
seeking solace with sullen trees
that knew of his demise
he trembled as he touched them
beseeched them for her mind
his eyes they spoke of yesterday
his guilt was dumb and blind
tell me trees, before I venture
from betrayal's keep
does she know,can she tell?
have I stole' her sleep
the trees they bowed and turned away
and in the clearing he
saw fruits of seeds that he had sown
with his crass,cult perfidy
for the she bled,as time stood down
upon the stone of years
and all around the nettles bloomed
watered by her tears
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bushkeeper
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2005-06-21 15:16:09]
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Re: She Bled
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 02:52:30 PM AEST
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This was beautifully written and it was well composed of detail and it flowed smoothly..
great poem... i really liked it.. especially the title
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Re: She Bled
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 01:28:11 PM AEST
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| This is an amazing write. It truly touched my heart. "A tower of lies, I know so well. I perferred my living hell. So go in peace, try again, Maybe next time, love will win." It is hard to understand why people that love each other allow lies into their protected world. Seems love means more to some than others. This is truly truly a great write. I am very impressed. Blue |
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