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Contributed by
bittersweet315
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:25:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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expectation-free
is what i wanna be
could i want you?
could you want me?
i won't wonder,
but i'll try my best
to let it flow
no false hopes, but true reality
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bittersweet315
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Re: Open
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:29:16 PM AEST
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Great thoughts... It is short, and very toward the point. But, I think that if you could just put a little more imagery into my mind. But, maybe I'm wrong. Maybe the poem isn't meant to be letting on, maybe it is suppose to make you think... But, anyways... great thoughts....
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Re: Open
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by bburden06 on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 08:49:30 PM AEST
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| Good Write! I like the short style! It is one thing I have not excelled in yet...it is very to the point...no wasted words! Great job! |
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Re: Open
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by Lin54 on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 11:28:03 AM AEST
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To expect nothing--then one wouldn't be disappointed. Wouldn't that be great!
Good short poem!
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Re: Open
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by europeanprincess on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST
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| Good, short, and to the point. I liked it. Keep up the good work. |
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