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Good-Bye
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I don't want to live anymore
Not like this
I tell my heart to stop working
I tell my pulse to stop beating
Don't let another breath escape my lungs
I drain all my blood
Praying for forgiveness
Tear stained cheeks turn pale white
My body grows cold & numb
Just as I wished
My heart stopped working
My pulse stopped beating
Not another breath escapes my lungs
Please forgive me for what I've done
This is my good-bye
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2005-06-21 00:31:55]
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Re: Good-Bye
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:34:20 AM AEST
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| What a sad poem. It was so good it went past my uh... Heart and to my soul, is that how you say it? Anyways, that was beautiful!! |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:54:55 AM AEST
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So very sad but well written I hope it's jus good poetry.
prayers, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by FireArchDruid on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 07:44:08 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by Chaser on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:57:16 PM AEST
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| i hate feeling like you do, i know at least somewhat how you feel. things have to get better, they have to. hold on |
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