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A World of Rain
Contributed by
SmokinJoeEvil
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Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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To write your heart onto a page
And have it thrown away.
To let your mind a sordid rage
And know you'll surely pay.
To feel as though you've lost a fight
And lost all hope as well.
To know you'll never be as right
Or outlive your own hell.
To be unravelled, mad with pain
And lack the will to mend.
To stand in this, a world of rain,
And never know its end.
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SmokinJoeEvil
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2003-01-06 17:20:00]
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Re: A World of Rain
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by EmSal on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:01:05 PM AEST
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| Great poem...so true.."And lack the will to mend." That is so true...I liked this poem!!! |
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Re: A World of Rain
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by sublime on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:43:25 AM AEST
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| That's some pretty powerful stuff Joe. I like it a lot. |
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Re: A World of Rain
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:45:04 AM AEST
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And oh how many of us have felt this way so often....and never know it's end.....that line stuck with me deeply, this is sooo beautifully written, it's unique...thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: A World of Rain
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:21:56 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Your first two lines are brilliant. |
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Re: A World of Rain
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by mystical_illusion on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:23:04 PM AEST
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Very well done, kept my attension and intrest thoughout the entire thing. Good job =)
-kelly |
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Re: A World of Rain
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by Kirby on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 01:08:58 PM AEST
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| wow hun I really like thi spoem, it's my first one I read of yous and not the last! I like! |
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Re: A World of Rain
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by Stitch on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:30:50 PM AEST
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This one took my breath away.
Stitch |
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