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“Never Enough”
Contributed by
andSHEbled__xx
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:24:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can't justify my wrongs
And I can't make this right
I wish you would speak
And maybe shed some light
When it comes to love
I've always been unable
When it comes to us
We've always been unstable
Everything was so confused
It never quite seemed real
So much drugs and alcohol
To hide the hurt we feel
I'm sorry I had to go
But I couldn't bare to stay
There was never enough happiness
To take the pain away
Copyright ©
andSHEbled__xx
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2005-06-20 23:24:10]
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Re: “Never Enough”
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by FireArchDruid on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:00:26 AM AEST
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| pretty good |
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Re: “Never Enough”
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by Mild_Tempest on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:41:28 AM AEST
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| This is so good. I loved the 3rd stanza. So emotional. Keep writing. |
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Re: “Never Enough”
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 01:48:20 AM AEST
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Heart wrenching yet powerfull.
Huggs,
emy
A masterpeice. |
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Re: “Never Enough”
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 07:43:08 PM AEST
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way to GO-
(away from all that..)
a most honest and humble write my friend
Much Happiness To You
B |
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Re: “Never Enough”
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 07:17:07 PM AEST
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Ooo... the ending is really hard hitting. That is tough to think. Many things can't be healed, but still don't lose hope. Nice poem...
Jodi |
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Re: “Never Enough”
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by bleedinheart on
Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 10:27:50 AM AEST
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| i hear ya |
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