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''Guilty Eyes''
Contributed by
andSHEbled__xx
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:22:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Rage upon the broken seal
In darkness, the fury flame
Beneath the wicked core
Unveils your lasting shame
Through the sunny rays
Sheds the crimson rain
Inside, dies the need
To release your faithful pain
Lying within the floorboards
A blood-stained bed sheet
Some where within your heart
Lies your everlasting defeat
Clench your pillow tight, my dear
Trouble is on the rise
You won't be able to hide
The guilt within your eyes
Find some peace here in your bed
Sleep well, my love, tonight
For you won't know what hit you
When comes the morning light
Copyright ©
andSHEbled__xx
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2005-06-20 23:22:05]
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Re: ''Guilty Eyes''
(User Rating: 1 )
by Karlee14 on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:51:55 PM AEST
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This is honestly one of the best poems I have ever read. Your expressing so many feeling in this poem that it's hard to keep up with it. It is very well written and completely immobilizing. Keep Up Your Excelent Work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love Always,
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Re: ''Guilty Eyes''
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:07:00 PM AEST
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I wanted to pick a stanza to quote.. but I could not
every one..
every word.. was so important to all of it-
fire and brimstone on them - from you..
B |
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Re: ''Guilty Eyes''
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 07:11:20 PM AEST
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Wow... this is a crazy poem. I really like it though. Is there anything else to say? Great write...
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