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CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:59:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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To all that has commented on me
I loved all that has been honested and free
To have one say that all is a glow
And make one know they have the flow
To those who think, their writes fall apart
Should know , deep down they come from the heart
To know they use what is in the inner
To make a calm and not to be a beginner
To ones who know they have the free will
To be a writer and make it a mole hill
To the amatuer, who is the best
But to the others, who give it their best
Just a little note for all YPDC writers...............what is written is from the heart
And makes each and all awhole a writer from the start.
So all keep writing and know you are good
Because it is chosen for all that could.
Thanks to all writers..............
Brew~ 2005
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brew
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2005-06-20 21:59:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:04:18 PM AEST (User
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back at cha, cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:13:34 PM AEST (User
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i really loved the ending. excellent message to weave throughout a piece. |
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Re: CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:18:30 PM AEST (User
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I have to agree with Jenn and Emy here. As long as it comes from the heart and given in honesty, you are a star. Your work is good and I like what you delivered here.
Rita |
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Re: CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rikki on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:11:40 PM AEST (User
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Very Nice!
Cheers to tyou!
Rikki |
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Re: CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:54:18 PM AEST (User
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I've read a lot of saddness here tonight-
this is just what the doctor ordered!
thanks to YOU my friend.
B |
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Re: CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 08:21:55 AM AEST (User
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Brew Thanks for all your comments on my Fairy-tales. I love writing and it is either a story or a poem depends how I feel. You found the right words for all the Y.P.D.C. users thankyou from bernard. |
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Re: CHEERS..............................TO ALL!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:46:36 PM AEST (User
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excellent words that only a true poet could express so perfectly...
wizard |
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