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Signs of really being yourself
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:50:12 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Stars all bright , in the dark of nite
One to see, what is really bright!
Look and see and what should be
To make and take, and go be free
Run and frolic and laugh out loud
To know, you make another so proud
To take a heart, and make it whole
Makes one wonder, how could it be told
Is it reality, or destiny in life?
To hold the key, that makes the strife!
Be one , or two and make them see
They hold the golden sign..........called the key!
Brew~2005
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:18:35 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of truth.
Huggs,
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:21:11 PM AEST
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Ah, the key to life. Many in mine. Family, friends, love, laughter, morals, respect, responsibility. Taking care of those you love knowing full well they are taking care of you. That is how life works. It is easy. The hard part for some is just finding that key within.
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:23:28 PM AEST
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| i really cant see myself at all in this, so i guess im not really being myself. you have good rhymes and substance to fit them. |
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by englishprincej on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:33:49 AM AEST
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This is excellent !
Whoever hols your key is truly lucky for it will unlock a heart of love and honesty. |
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by JasTrask_22 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:47:30 PM AEST
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this was an awesome write!!
i loved it.
++all you really need is yourself *//*
JAZzmine |
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:57:05 PM AEST
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this has an old world style that I love and often use myself..
a mirror image ..this
your writes are magnificent..
I love all Ive read-
B |
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:56:54 PM AEST
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excellent poem brew, great flow.
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Re: Signs of really being yourself
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:01:44 PM AEST
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Im not quite sure i understand the poem
maybe send a message explaining it
but it sounded good
-->Rae |
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