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Halcyon Gypsy
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Very few will ever see, the
deepest part that lives in me,
some think they've known me
but its certainly not true,
they never touched my soul
as only rare few can do,
Oh, sure brief moments,
where some moment in time
their lives were near mine.
Yet those many who lay claim
to my friendship and my name,
have only scratched the surface
unless they too have lit the flame,
anyone of us can live idyllically
suggesting happy tranquillity.
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2003-01-06 16:45:00]
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Re: Halcyon Gypsy
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:46:09 PM AEST
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| this is the part that we keep closest to usnot to let anyone in to see whats there,,this is us,,who we are,,,wellwritten,,spooky |
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Re: Halcyon Gypsy
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:19:30 PM AEST
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| good write enjoyed it very much very true |
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Re: Halcyon Gypsy
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:42:13 AM AEST
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This is thought-provoking and insightful, Nessa. Another great piece from you. "...unless they have lit the flame...": I like this line. A warning yet not a warning. Passion thrives in you, but carefully selective. Excellent
Always your friend,
William |
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Re: Halcyon Gypsy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 11:50:22 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful piece...I kinda see myself this way some times. |
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Re: Halcyon Gypsy
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by colinb on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 01:31:49 AM AEST
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| beautiful,insightful beautiful write |
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